Revisions

Now that I am deeper into the assignment I am realizing that my topic is less of a researchable topic and more of an open-ended essay. Originally I said that I was going to research how the fast food industry sacrifices animal rights and regulations in the pursuit of making the best tasting food in shortest amount possible. I now realize that the way I worded this is incorrect. It makes it seem as if I am going to just put information onto a piece of paper, instead of what I am supposed to be doing, which is researching a topic that I will come to a conclusion about via research. Therefore I am going to research "is it ethical for fast food producers to make their food in the manner that they do?” I believe that this is a much better topic because it allows me to come to a conclusion on a particular problem. With this change now my essay is going to have a purpose and not just typing in information into a word document. There is also a lot of information on the web and other sources that I can use that will build on my topic.